All Comments on 'Ethan and Ms. Appleby'

I could not read past the fourth paragraph. The writing style leaves much to be desired. " he sits back and smiles" What are those descriptors for? The story idea sounded great. please try again .

Many young men desire older woman near by. Most women ignore the signs but some tease and enjoy the attention. A few take the next step, it can be rewarding

Well I trust Ethan will enjoy Gracelyn for real in the next chapter. She just want to coach a 'virgin'......... maybe you should devleop Ethan's 'game'.

Jumped to fast into the bed scene