by EMiamiRiverRat
Pretty pointless really and not that good, your other one is better...
and you know there are only 8 Ivy League colleges and they are really hard to get into...
A grand example of less being more, even in the case of narrative and/or words.
Well Done. Thanks,
Too many cliche parts, too many euphemisms, and a wholly unbelievable narration and inane dialogue.