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by Anonymous

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by fridayam04/22/12

A good first post

I will look for more of your work. Thank you.

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by Anonymous04/22/12

I don't normally read in this category, but I really enjoyed this. Very well-written.

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by Jenneva04/22/12

Great first story!

Nice read, excellent writing. Looking forward to more!

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by mel_pomene04/22/12

Very nice work!

Especially for a first story - this was quite a story, well-written and very erotic. I think we have a new talent among us - welcome - and please bring us more. Five stars and thank you.

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by Ardella04/22/12

Your writing is wonderful. Even when I reached the scene where she is used by multiple 'gentlemen', which is normally not something I am usually interested in reading about, I still read on. Relaying this as a compliment to you, and hoping that you continue and write more!
:)

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by Anonymous04/22/12

good

thanks for sharing this it was very good

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by Justrex10/25/13

Very nicely done

Very nice.
I do like your style.

-Rex

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