Really cute fantasy, short and well executed. My only complaint is that it's short, and that's maybe not so much of a complaint when the story is all about teasing, is it?
... in more ways than one! Will there be any more of this torturous delight? A fine story - 5 *s - but 'Remotely Controlled' might have been a better title - or simply 'Remote Control'. Anyway, thank you!
I'm hoping there will be a continuation of this story.
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