All Comments on 'Please Protect Me'

by EMiamiRiverRat

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grayge37grayge37almost 12 years ago
Too absurd!

Even for fantasy lit this is just to rediculous! I stopped reading at less than half way through the story. Find some other endeavour - other than writing this crap!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 12 years ago
No Do not stop writing because of this.....

I found it really funny.

I can see the joke in this.

Good for a one off.

ES

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

to grayge oh shut up you twit it was funny, but then again if you want to read something more dramatic try the illiad.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayalmost 12 years ago
Killer Sperm?

First of all he raped his mother then fed her a line of bullshit, she has to be a dumb twit to believe him.

Then there were other women? Was there something in the water that killed women's brain cells?

I gave it a 3 stars for your fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good Writing

Readers take this stuff too serious, it's good to have someone with a sense of humor...these other readers...stop taking things to heart.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
REALLY???

You need to go back to the video games you 15 yr.olds play and let the real writers write on this site! Sincewhen is rape considered protection? And you expect the readers to believe ALL the women in your fantasy neighborhood are as STUPID as your mother? Your "story" is a joke!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Well it is a new concept for the M/S story!

Nothing wrong with the story from EMiamiRiverRat.

In fact he came up with a new twist to the usual mother/son tale.

Sure he needs a bit more practice but the the fellow has good ideas :)

Good luck with your development as a great story teller over time EMiamiRiverRat.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
I like the story

Outrageous, humorous and erotic plus deffently original.

Fucking her as much as he did, would probably make her addicted to his dick.

Thanks for the read...

topacetopaceover 11 years ago
Interesting story with a new twist!

Got to admit, this is an excellent story.

It's a new twist on an old subject - excellent work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
moron

sounds right....bill

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 10 years ago
Ouch -

Stupid is as stupid does lol

So he cons one dummy and she finds many dummies all meet his grossly off center needs - and now a second generation of inbreeds - damn

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Great story! Obv its far-fetched, but i dont think the writer meant this story to be too realistic. Keep up the wirting and youll start making even better stories.

As for everyone else, I agree with the other poster, you really need to chill out. Its a fantasy story. Dont flip if its not perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Best story ever!

oops i mean your best story ever, gave it a 1.

jcfinley1jcfinley1over 8 years ago
If Only

If adult women were as stupid to fall for that ploy, I would have 300 plus children. LOL

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Well that was the silliest story I ever read so 5*'s for original stuff

The funny idea of KILLER sperm!!! LOL!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I WILL HAVE TO USE THAT ONE "" KILLER SPERM""

I never thought of that one"Killer sperm"? Surely women can't be that stupid! Yet

again you've heard of the term"Stupid Bitches when in heat" OH OH OH ( HORSGASM MAN) YOU KNOW WITH THE POPULATION OF THE EARTH CHANCES ARE THAT THIS IS REALLY DOES/DID HAPPEN ? FREAKING GOOD EH !

Fantastic story!

Love you all! GREG.

OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

readergeereadergeeover 6 years ago
Gullibility

Those women are unbelievable. Dumb must be contagious.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
idiot

please you idiot stop...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
TOO FUNNY!!!

Killer sperm! LOL!!!

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

Hilarious story

3/5

Dapperdan2021Dapperdan2021almost 3 years ago

Started out alright, could have used more effort in the middle and end.

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

I like the story but it does go bit far. AAA+++

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Gave it a 2 it was just to far out there?????????????????

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Just an average story just to much stupid stuff ! a 3

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Your math has her birthing you at 16, unlikely. The rest is just too ridiculous.

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