All Comments on 'Rachel'

Thank you

I LOVE this story. You did an excellent job! Thank you. More, please!

You've paced this story absolutely right! Well done! There has to be more from these three characters. It is a sexy, absorbing story well told.

feet aren't my fetish, but a well crafted story is. bravo!

Great story! Please continue!

No kidding. Anyway, it was well developed, with plenty of evocative description. Great stuff.

I have read most of your stories. this is really one of your best pieces of work. great stuff. goood to see you back on fire

I like the slow build up and call into wanton lust. Excellent!

Thanks a lot for writing such a hot, sensuous ...- missing the words - ....story!

Especially with that sweet femdom spice....

Really one of the best of the few stories on lit!!

Please go on writing forever!

You manage to set up and finish off an interesting premise without rushing or dragging it out. I look forward to reading more.

I really like the femdom spice too, Chloe is a brilliant character and one just loves her as we read this. Great descriptions and pacing, and the dynamics between the three really helped add spice to the encounters. Their reluctance / awkwardness at first was so lifelike and charming. Great work!

Oh god, this story is incredible sexy. I liked how cloe took comand. I would love a followup story with cloe fasten her control over them and make them both her obeyened l

ife in lovers.

Bravo!

This is one of those stories where readers a hoping for a part 2. The characters are well written and the story just pulls you in and has you wanting more. Very well done.

Well written characters who I would love to see make a comeback in a part two. Nicely done