All Comments on 'Photo Studio Ch. 02'

Love the story, please continue

Look forward to these two continuing to hook up

of ocurse oyu have to bring in some other gals Sunny & Miranda back into the mix for some GROUP PICTURES!

I have read several of your stories (not all yet) and all I have read have been very enjoyable. This series started very good. Imaginative setting, great action, and believable dialogue. I really look forward to reading Scott's further adventures with his clients and the other women in his circle. I do have one off topic question though. What happened to the end of the Girls Scout Leader Training series? You left me hanging.

What happened to his rule about never fucking married women?

What's the betting Miranda filled in her friends Sunny and Amy about the contents of her new client's boxers?

Just like it should be - nice work -

BTW Anon - I did not see any indication that Amy was married so no conflict there -

This seems a perfect vehicle for a lot more fun and if Amy is developed properly for it she could be a participant and instigator of a lot of it - nice start -

Great story with a lot of potential. I'd love to read more chapters.

But seriously, if you have an editor, get another

Mis-use of apostrophe ess drives me up a wall and you have some strange sentence construction occasionally

And for those who complain about grammar Nazis, it really does stop the flow of the story when you see something like that

...that a woman fucking in just her stockings i hyper-sexy - even more so if there's a garter belt.

I wish Amy had kept hers on...

Guess I need to buy a better camera!!!!!

And REALLY good photographers know how to get females into the dark room to see what develops!!