Breaching Gloria

Outstanding !!

Keep up the good work !

Phenomenal

Great story, thanks for submitting.

What?

I had to comment to say how horrendous this is. I said, she said, he said.

Great story

Great story, it was very well detailed.



To the idiot that posted "I had to comment to say how horrendous this is. I said, she said, he said."......... Not once in the story does it say "she said", and the other two are because it's told in first person. So you good sir, are an asshole.

very enjoyable - thank you

Waste

is rubbish or trash. A waist is part of the human anatomy.