All Comments on 'Merlin Ch. 03'

Good story any more installments?

Leading into the actual sex scene was a great way to leave this sotry open for many possibilities. good work

You have ended it just right. There is no need to go on.

haunting

Kudos on an imaginative and tight short story.

Second time read this story in the last four years I've been on Literotica and I still love it.

Superb just the right length rang true with many nature religions lending weight to such a story being plausible, a very enjoyable read, tight and tense at times overall very good iindeed.