All Comments on 'Lines Are Crossed at the Beach Ch. 02'

All lines ARE crossed, I can't wait to read more!!

I enjoyed both chapters, now I want more.

This is a hot story and I want to live it

Thanks

Joe

Only Laura got fucked by Brad and Jake?

How about Laura's husband... he was not able to fuck Alex and Paige?

It is very unfair for Laura's husband.

Licking and sucking a cock going in and out of a pussy is a lot of fun. I like sucking a clit or a cock. Also love to to be fucked in the ass and have it fillked with cum and feel it run down my legs. It makes you feel good that you made someone cum in you.. I f you have it in someone's ass and they push back on you, then you know you doing it well.

Something wrong with this story, everyone crosses the line so to speak, however

Laura's hubby , who remains nameless, seems to have only achieved one complete blow job with one of the other wives .His wife on the other hand fucks both of the other husbands, besides playing with one of the other wives. No balance here, sounds cucky to me .

Jake's a pushy and Laura is a slut. It should be fair to all parties.

I seriously doubt it'll happen since both the stories are published sp long ago. But we need to fair by Laura's husband. It's not a group sex thing. It's she cucking him. NOT FAIR. Why is it always OK for the wife to be shared in most cases and not the husband?

While several other comments mention how unfair it was for Laura's (unnamed) husband not to get to fuck one or both of Paige and Alex, the point I would make is that it would be so hot for all of the holidayers to fuck all of the other spouses, preferably all in the same location at the same time.

Great story...but why didn't he suck Brad's big dick? He wanted to and I'm sure Paige would have enjoyed the show.