So this has taken a really bad turn i was hoping for a happy story but guess thats out the window but i still like it hopefully theres some peace at the end and not to much death
what build up? You jumped into this one right where your first story ended. Only this started on a much darker side. W/the deaths of many Neko and thru no fault of their own but rather the fault of a human. Well is sounds like maybe you are going to introduce us to another group of Neko, just don't let the humans get these guys killed too. I look forward to chapter 2 and your next big surprise.....
How shocking and terrifying for the Nekos. How badly humans do behave. Sky must have encountered Nekos somewhere to be so unnerved by the news broadcast. I can't wait to read more!
Seriosly tho, poor jess... And what about her daughter? Im soooo not happy with you right now lol. i know what you have wrote is a very realistic veiw on what would happen if we did find another species but... But i like many others i suspect wanted a happyish ending for the nekos
What a bunch of f-ing-shit-ass-bullshit!
You had the Nekos we all fell in love with killed or imprisoned...?
I'm done reading your stories. What an unapeing foolish turn to that story!
F-ing Sucks !!!!!
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