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Caught by the Rain

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by Anonymous07/07/12

Normally 'conversation' stories sound forced and do nothing for me. Yours however managed to be quirky without being crass. Well done.

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by trace_ekies11/06/13

A fun read

I like dialog. I enjoy having the characters talk about themselves - what they are doing or what they have done. This was particularly well done. Believable and readable!

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