All Comments on 'The Pool Party'

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NormCastleNormCastleover 11 years ago
And the point is ?

I guess I am confused, why the camera is there is no promise of a second or third chapter ?

ElectricBadgerElectricBadgerover 11 years ago
Great Start

I look forward to seeing more! Could use a bit more pausing for detail, but the plot is great so far. *****

nighthawk22204nighthawk22204over 11 years ago
Naughty, naughty girls!

Maybe they need to be punished?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Unbelievable

What a daughter that is and her friends

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Where's the next part you promised?

Ok it's been a year. So, where's that 2nd part..?

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