All Comments on 'Makeup Sex'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
write more!

I didn't want this story to end! You show a real talent for writing. You could write a prologue chapter, more about how they met, or another chapter on more of their relationship. Please keep going.

jimmydeltorojimmydeltoroover 11 years agoAuthor
Really?

Thank you, I appreciate the comments, an erotic author I know told me to post it here to find out if it had any weight at all. Oh, and yes, I am writing more of this story line I think.

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