All Comments on 'His Favorite Birthday: The Next Day'

Well written and realistic, but it sounds like the two wives will keep at it until the friendship is ruined for good.

Great story. Well written and well developed story lines. I hope there is a third installment and continuation of this story line.

To Sidney, why does it have to ruin the friendship. As one who has been married for 31 years and in the swing lifestyle for 26 years, our closest and best friends are the couple we have swung with for 26 years. Don't be so narrow minded.

Love the loving couple aspect and the raft scene with Pat running his fingers over Kate's ass and pussy are a high point. Can't wait to hear the next installment. Keep it up!

That female perspective comes shining through vividly, paints an excellent picture for this reader and hopefully many more. These couples and their story line could be well expanded. Very enjoyable!

Pathetic bunch.

This was a great sequel to the previous story. The tease was fantastic. It would be hard to improve in this, but I would like to see you try.

Would love to see a part 3

This is such a well written and laid out story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It was quite erotic but never smutty to me. Bravo to the Author!