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The Night of the Party Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anarchia09/30/12

fantastic. cant wait for more!

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by sweetsforhoney09/30/12

Great

I love how you developed all this in one page, wanted and begging for more...

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by RecHiker09/30/12

Ecellent

This is an excellent story told with plenty of details to allow ones immagination to form a mental picture of a firey red head and her brother enjoying each other's body. Thanks for sharing.

RecHiker

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by xKissingDimplesx10/01/12

Love flirty bro/sis stories. ;)

Keep it going!

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by Anonymous04/24/13

Needs more

Please add at least one or two more chapters.
What's the adults reaction when they wake in the morning?
Did she get pregnant?
Do they continue?
Inquiring minds want to know...

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by Anonymous06/18/13

way to rushed and unfinished

nuf said

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by chocolatesista11/06/13

very good

hope there will be more

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by Anonymous11/20/13

way to rushed and unrealistic

no way would they forgive each other so fast. when the parents said the relatives were staying why didn't he ask to stay at a friends house? or outside in a tent? seems after the way she acted he would have made plans to go to a different college to be as far from her as possible. after the birthday crap why would she even want to drink with him or be alone with him? you have so many stupid plot holes that were totally glossed over and need to be explained and filled out. you need to delete the series and rewrite it making it longer and more realistic, as is it rates a negative vote for being totally unbelievable.

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by Anonymous05/15/14

just like a night light DULL

nuff said.

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