All Comments on 'Levi's Microscopic World'

That was great storytelling.

As intricate as anything I've read on this website.

You are a very gifted writer, so much attention to detail. Once I started reading this story I couldn't stop and really did not want it to end. Thank you.

Need I say more? Simply one of the best stories I've read of late.

Would like to know how things turned out in SD, though.

A great work of SF and I would think it would make a great movie.

Seriously a great read and like someone had already posted could not stop reading it. Well done. Please write more!

Great job! Loved it, we'll told.

It was absolutely enthralling to have the opportunity to enjoy such a wonderful story! The character developement was splendid as you took the main character from an emotionally retarded self-centered individual into a living person who finally begins to connect with others. By far the most complete story I have read on this site. It packs the emotional punch that so many others are lacking. I would hope other authors might peruse your work and learn a thing or too about connecting with their readers. Well done!

I enjoyed it, and I hate sifi. Well done

He was house schooling and then gone to princeton

I liked this story - thought was funny. I think a couple of the commentators are taking things too seriously - these stories are entertainment. Five stars from this reader.

An absolutely wonderful tale. I love the way you can give your readers the information that goes with the story in a way that doesn't come of as a monologue. I'm very impressed with this story but I would love to see if you could come up with a continuation or a new story for Levi and Linda.

This story captivated me ...Very few literotica autors have real writing skils .

Your story was best I've read!! You made it almost believable with the security segments and intellectual descriptions. Look forward to more stories from you!!

Just can't get past the fact that your main character is a rapist even if his victim loves him now.

Are there any women on left earth that don’t become unconscious after intense, mind blowing nuclear orgasms?…….10 to 15 times with each sexual encounter? Especially those with a side piece who’s cock is 10 to 14 inches, as big around as a soda can, and 5 times the size of her clueless husband’s? ……..who ALWAYS considers taking them back and forgiving them for anywhere from 30 to 200 sexual encounters …..many times with three to four men at once….’air tight’…….and with her repeatedly telling the husband that she never had sex like it was with the lover and how he, the husband could never compare to the cocksman her lovers were.? R.H.