All Comments on 'Sucking His Cock'

I'm a guy and you did an excellent job of making it feel like you were sucking ME off!

I guess in some alternate world I owe you dinner, or at least cab fare! ;)

Good story. Keep writing.

RS

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Short, sweet and to his point. I like short flash fiction erotica like this piece, often harder to write than you would think. Enjoyable.

totally into the story until the end... major turn off when i visualize cum shots in the mouth. Now cum shots on titties and ass, thats hot!!!

As I read your story, I was jerking off, pulling hard on my cock(a six incher), and actually managed to cum when the guy flooded your mouth. My thick sticky cum pooled on my stomach and I wished it was in your mouth.

Loved the way you wrote it.

I read all four of your stories, and you are such a good and creative writer. the only thing i would add is stretch your stories out more for pervs like me that love to read girls sucking prick and drinking cum. you are explicit, but i beg for more. lots of women love prick juice squirting into their mouths and please write more about that and them slowly swallowing sperm, that's such a turn on to jack off to! talk more about the wrinkles on uncut pricks, large and medium sizes. scrotum licking and more cum drinking. i can tell you love to drink cum and have your ass fucked and licked, as ass licking is one of my weaknesses besides cumming in a girls mouth. i had a girl for two years that would drink my cum morning, noon and then again at nite before we slept, and she would ALWAYS milk my prick down from the base to get the last 2 or 3 drops of sperm directly from my cock slit, as she craved male sperm. she cheated on me with her dad and brother i found out later, and that was to no doubt drink their cum. talk more on this and ass licking. keep up the good work