A Taste of Midnight

Lovely

I enjoyed this quite a bit. I do think I would have classed it as Lesbian rather than erotic horror, but to each their own. To my taste it doesn't matter. LOL. You did a nice job with the details. We don't get much of "Marion's" motivation for why she does what she does... we're left to assume she's simply pure evil... but for this sort of story there really isn't anything wrong with that. Nice job.

nice one!

Well written and very much enjoyed..

A very enjoyable lesbian vampire tale. There were a handful of places where a final proof-read could have caught oopses that a spell-check wouldn’t (e.g. “…what on earth a girl like her Marion could possibly see could in her”, “she image shifted again”) and it seemed to me that Katy accepted her doom too readily, but I still really enjoyed it.