All Comments on 'Blackmail'

I like both these stories a lot. Seems like there is a lot you could do with someone in this position. I gave both a 5 and can't understand why they are voting lower than that. Some true rubbish gets high votes and great stories like these are down in the 3's.

two good introductory stories... though this was my favourite.

maybe you can make your next stories a little longer, with a little more characterisation?

but great job :)