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Halloween Witch

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/15/12

oops

Sorry for the 1 score. That was a mistaken click; should have been a 5.

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by Anonymous10/17/12

Wow

damn that was amazing ^.^ I wanna know what happens to them?

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by EesomeBeastie10/22/12

Good premise but let down by stilted dialogue.

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by Pandora3310310/26/12

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I value all of the comments that people leave me, and I work on taking their advice when I write my next story. Please comment and if you leave your name, I will respond. Thank you. Pandora33103

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by Anonymous03/04/13

Interesting

I liked the idea, it definitely pulled me in. But the dialogue and descriptions were rather dry, making the story kind of flat.

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