Sorry for the 1 score. That was a mistaken click; should have been a 5.
damn that was amazing ^.^ I wanna know what happens to them?
Good premise but let down by stilted dialogue.
I value all of the comments that people leave me, and I work on taking their advice when I write my next story. Please comment and if you leave your name, I will respond. Thank you. Pandora33103
I liked the idea, it definitely pulled me in. But the dialogue and descriptions were rather dry, making the story kind of flat.
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