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Old Man Discovers... Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by mumblegooseegg10/15/12

Yes, please continue

... but do not "dispense with" quotes. A little effort on your part to add them (and to go to a new paragraph for each speaker) would make your story SO MUCH easier to read.

5 stars nonetheless.

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by tturtle5010/15/12

Darn!

Was really good!

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by klippert10/15/12

like a dream...

guess us married fellas would luv to find a friend with extras...though...not sure I'd get as turned on with the Suck it bitch. either way....I like where this is leading

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by tnwriter10/15/12

Re: comments

@ mumblegoose-thanks for comments
@kilppert- I regretted the "suck it bitch" as soon as I submitted

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by Anonymous10/31/12

Great!

I was begining to think I was the only old fart "62" that loved nipple play.

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