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Can't Control Herself

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/29/12

short but good

very good but much to short

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by vtscubaguy10/29/12

I want more, an excellent start

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by Butterflies51210/29/12

What can I say, I'm an erotic literature tease. Maybe I'll write a longer story some day...

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by mel_pomene10/29/12

Short and sweet

A nice story, if a little short and hurried. You write well - but please look up the uses of 'to lie' and 'to lay'; I know it's something of a lost cause, but it still matters to some of us!

Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

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by wordJunkie11/03/12

Nice first effort...

I like the short ones as well as the longer ones...but sometimes the quick fix is just what I need! Thanks -- hcl

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by wellhun_dan05/02/13

So good, just the sweet scene of her masturbating for him and the control he has over her.. more than a little turned on and desperate for part 2. Can you spare time for the next short instalment?

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