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Christmas Confessional

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/14/12

unfinished, I feel like I just wasted my time.

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by Anonymous11/14/12

if only life could be so easy, someone built the bridge and crossed it.
dad was great, he sensed he fixed, lucky family cp

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by jeansguy11/14/12

This WAS a wonderful story and then it just stopped. Went from 5 star to 1 star and I wish I could vote zero star.

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by avidreadr11/14/12

I enjoyed this story. It had me tearing up pretty quickly. It is too bad that life can't always work out that easily.

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by lonesomedove6611/14/12

Lovely

But I do hope there is another chapter to go with this, I would also understand if you are finished by his Dad's declaration but I want to hear how Zack felt and if he let him get away with it so easily. I know I wouldn't

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by mysealtheeclipse11/14/12

You left it unfinished...

while the story was good, i feel like you left it hanging, not like you... I've read all your stories and usually give them 3 to 5 stars, but this one isn't feeling it...

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by KeithD11/14/12

Full Story

What the hell, people? I read the story as one of realistic relationship issues in the problem of coming out, of the need to communicate, and of acceptance. The acceptance completes the story. What are some here on about concerning the story not being completed--or about there needing to be any more to it? It even gave good sex. What did you want? All of them hopping into bed for an orgy? Maybe you watch too much TV.

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by nanobot11/14/12

to my favorite author

Your stories are extremely well crafted. You use foreshadowing skillfully but you never give the game away. Your endings are often surprising, unforeseen and manage to fit the story perfectly. Pacing keeps the appetite whetted, not just the sex, the characters varied and realistic have genuine emotions, their arousal is our arousal, their problems and goals are likewise copacetic.I do admire your range of styles and depth of research. For me this is the center of masterful storytelling. I hope you have an agent, you have real talent. Please forgive my low scoring of this story as I accidentally clicked on the wrong star. You get top score from me-5 stars! I look forward to more of your work.

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by pkm19494911/14/12

Looks like O. Henry doesn't play well with the youngsters.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story, as it was. It totally reminded me of some of the O. Henry short stories I read...many years ago. Anytime I see your handle on a story, I read it. I know it's going to be good and I'm going to enjoy it.

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by feelinromantic11/15/12

Please consider a follow up to this - im intrigued to see zak's reaction, particularly when if he takes it the wrong way that Dan didn't choose to tell his family but was called out on it (no pun intended). Another great piece tho - thanks for sharing :)

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by vetty11/15/12

Nice One!

I always read stories when I see your tag as the author, love how you give hot detail and relatable characters. Good twist at the end of this one.

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by cannd11/15/12

I assume this isn't finished. I'd like to see him call. I have a feeling Zack might not be sitting there waiting for him this time. Both father and son are terrible though. How could you leave your partner completely alone on christmas? To know they have no one to celebrate wtih when you're surrounded by family? Please finish the story

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by Anonymous11/17/12

Loved it!

I thought this story was fantastic. The only thing I would have loved to see at the end was Dan making contact with Zack. But still it was great. Thanks for sharing will all of us.

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by Nemo1811/18/12

Great story

I hope we get to revisit them later

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by Anonymous11/27/12

Casey 1988

Please write at least a sequel to the story to finish it.

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by NekoParks11/27/12

Enjoyable Story

Nicely written. I would love to see another chapter.

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by Rugrat6012/11/12

Well Done

I too would like to see a followup to this story. Just to know what happens. Well written.

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