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by Anonymous

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by HarryHill11/15/12

Hmnnn

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by Desejo11/15/12

? our urgent cars?

I like the general feel of this but I am completely confused by the "urgent cars".

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by tazz31711/16/12

WHAT STRANGE OCCURENCE CAUSES

some to fall and some to remain. Is it chance, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by DawnJ11/24/12

It's not ready yet...

...so be patient, Wind! *grins* Everything in its season...even the falling leaf schedule! :)
And Desejo, I think that might be a typo..."urgent care", perhaps?

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