by SpoiledRedhead
I did not think your writing could improve. It has. I want to vote '6'....Very arousing...Love it!
You wrote this so well it was as if I was there watching it all happen. Keep it up!!!
And done soon!
Then I wouldn't lose my place in mid stroke!
Great story, love the imagery the building tension and the reward at the end!
Thanks for the erotic gem of a story. I liked your style and everything that happened to that lollipop.