I vote for you to continue the game. Problem, now that mutual interest has been devulged a slow touch and tickle seduction seems counterproductive for readers.
There are females around who bikini trim because their lover likes them full and womanly. Media hype steers thinking into a Stepford Wife world of sameness. How totally vanilla that is.
Hmmm I like it & would love to see where they go from here.
I think it is a clever, funny, spicy story just like it is. I'd love to hear where it might end up, but I'm ok with it as is too!
please continue! I'd love to hear more from your characters. Well written
Your story is probably the first I've read that involved no sex that had me interested and cheering for the heroine. Not only was I imagining a playful ending, but I was almost more excited for her to admit her feelings to her friend. Thank you for such a non-standard erotic story.
Terrific build up, erotic without sex. Well done.
lol...Loved it. You are right, this story can stand on it's own, BUT, I sure would love to see where this goes. So, could you please write a follow up? Pretty please with sugar on top?
It stands very well on its own but I wouldn't mind seeing a follow up if they did go gay for each other.
I would like to see a version with far more flesh surrounding this basic skeleton.
Chapter two please hurry!
Very nicely set up. I'll watch for chapter 2.
This could definitely stand on its own. However, I feel like you're teasing us by ending it so abruptly. Please write a second chapter. Thanks!
It does stand alone, but I would love to see another chapter!
It would be wrong because .... , well just because. Sequels so rarely work, Further pursuit of this wonderful story and characters would undercut the integrity and organic development won to this point. It would make me so mad if you were to violate our unspoken, pact so quit while you are ahead.
This is not some lame reverse psychology ploy. Well maybe it is . No ! I mean ...the potential dilution of this saga-être will speed up global warming according to my top secret calculations that I can't show you for your own good. So no sequel because I said so.
If you persist in this potential folly and California gets hit by another earthquake, you will be liable . I will personally see forfeit the puter ' you wrote the sequel on with my super powers invested in me due to hidden clause in Patriot Act.
Sincerely- your Newest no. 1 fan
Chapter 2 please you CAN'T leave it like that PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE with a cherry on top!!!!!
you kinda have to write another chapter ;)
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE !
Don't be a tease!!!! You got me all wet ;)
PLEASE write the next chapter! I'm wet just from the anticipation of what could happen next!
Please you simply must write the next chapter! Please I will love you forever if you do.
Your writing is an object lesson for all authors on this site. Nowhere is the difference between an erotic story and a story related to sex better demonstrated than in your stories, and yours seem to be so effortlessly and truly erotic. I really don't care if there is a Chapter 2, but please, please keep posting your gems. Thank you
My heart just started having palpitations. Amazingly written. Just exceptional.
yes, keep writing
...it's perfect at that moment.
your build-up is amazing. it's erotic without even a kiss. please continue as fast as you can :) you're a person of great talent!
Lovely, lovely story. :)
You're crazy if you don't continue. That was amazing!
Oh please continue!!
oh wow awesome i love that! i hope you continue this story,when you think of it there`s a lot of substance and promise underneath the title.tnx bi_cathy..(cinder)
just awesum..plz write th 2nd part..SOON..its amazng..
That was awesome
The title says it all. I join the choir begging for more. It's really a pretty stock fantasy but your writing made it come alive in a quite believable way. Great job. (And your celeb choices - right on the money, especially the stunning Stana Katic.)
This was just so good... You have to write more, I can see this developing so sensually. Please write more
Please more love the way your going with this thumbs up
Great story. Please continue.
A truly great story. What MAN doesn't want to think about two women and at least get to watch.
I liked the way you have set about the story. You have certainly given us a taste of what is to come. Pardon the pun.
You build up the tension so well!! Amazing more pls!!
And thank you ;)
hell no,this is a lesbian story.ok we get it they have boyfriends.but its a big fucking turn on to add the men when they try to get close and stuff.no i wouldnt read this,at least not in the lesbian section,if u feel like writing more do it,but in another section.Thank you.u write well i wont argue on that,but its not what i wanted to read on this section and u completely turned me off right now.keep on writing. just dont confuse the sections
you should write more and continue this story. most enjoyable.. thanks.
This brief story was terrific & I'm sure some other writer's might be saying: "Why didn't I think of that??"
The male / female conversation back & forth just seemed to pull the reader in to his or hers own thoughts about the discussion.
This is a good writer's mind working !!
I don't usually give a 5 star to a one pager, but this one was unusually good !!
..lil tease. Great story, thank you.
This is one of the best stories I've found pn Literotica in a long time; and it's become one of my favorts. Please wrtie a sequel for this story where they actually 'go gay' for one another. Please! I would really like to see how it would all fall out.
I think you should keep going with the story, I mean you've already got the plot set up. It seames like you really thought it out. If your stuck a good plot twist for you it that maybe the boyfriends catch the girls in action. Then again maybe not whatever you write I'm sure it will be just fine.
Definitely continue this story!!
Continue this story immediately please! It's fantastic already
Very good intro. Keep writing.
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