by abiguy
My vote for going further? Give it a rest. This is the kind of writing I hate on Lit. Not that the story itself is bad. But you give us half a page after making your readers wait for almost 2 years. I know Literotica is free and everyone has real life challenges that get in the way. I'm also kind of new here and don't comment very much. But it's as if you don't care about the people who started reading along two years ago and got interested and then have to wait and wait and wait for updates. It's lazy. Like you didn't have anything better to do so lets just throw out 1000 words and then go back to life. Don't bother with another chapter.
It worth of waiting for. I know that youre very busy person and im very patient. Bring on the next chapter
I loved the fact that you continued the story after I had all but given up hope. Sure, the chapter's a bit short, but that certainly isn't a reason to stop being creative! Your style is amazing, and it would be a complete shame if you had stopped :)