All Comments on 'Shy First Time Swinger Wife Ch. 01'

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dtyolmndtyolmnover 11 years ago

Outstanding beginning and looking forward to the next chapter..

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Waiting for more

Quite waiting with anticipation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More

The start of this story has me wanting MORE...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
"Sorry, I have a penchant for terrible puns," said Jason.

That wasn't a pun. It was a double entendre.

ErotonautErotonautover 11 years ago
Too brief

You'd scarcely started than you hit the pause. I did enjoy the character development, but the brevity ensured it was somewhat of a tease.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
So what awaits them at home..

Apart from the kids and a babysitter? 3*

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