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Bad Teacher Ch. 08

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/22/12

Great Series!!!

You are by far one of the best authers on this site.I can't wait to see what happens next.

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by saltpepper5789812/22/12

Good going

Would like to see you push Carmen beyond the limit of perversion. More of risque sexual act in presence of her family namely her son. I believe there is always room for full sex act during night when others sleep! but that does not bring out the adrenaline rush compare to fucking right under the nose of husband/son. Could you please keep away pregnancy issues in pursuit of enjoying Carmen's pussy for a longer period of time......I reckon that would be more enjoyable. Furthermore it would be a wonderful idea to present your friend a used panty of his mom to help him imagine a hot pussy you get to bang recently. He just doesn't have to know it was his mom you banged, not for now!

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by Anonymous12/22/12

Hairy

The plot is getting to be bullshit. Try for a new story taht is realistic.

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by Anonymous12/22/12

lol, garbage

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by LordSlamdawgg12/22/12

Fish or Cut Bait. Fork the Road Ahead !

This author is skilled but we're not covering any new ground here. The lead character has to decide whether he actually cares for Carmen or not. Barring that maybe they should get discovered , anything just so the story stays fresh. Here the two are just repeating feats of duplicity and covertness. Been there, done that.

Judging from the paucity of words in this installment, hetup is running out of ideas. If so let's wind it up before the story jumps the shark for the 2nd or 3 rd time. I'm not saying to end this necessarily just change settings , maybe add some characters. I've enjoyed this series a lot and want to see things stay vibrant.

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by Anonymous12/22/12

Nice series

I like the story so far. I would like to see Ryan assert his control keep pushing Carmen's borders. Sex with other students and other men. Costume party would be an interesting way to have her get with the students. Maybe a trip for a spring break teacher's conference.

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by Anonymous12/22/12

just keep it between ryan n carmen. with ryan exerting more control n carmen falling more into submission. eventually ryan falls for his slutty teacher...

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by frost122612/22/12

keep up the good work

Ryan is asserting his dominance over Carmen even to the point of pushing her into sex with her even with her husband still in the same room. Carmen is unable to say no to Ryan because he has released the inner slut in her and the idea of the passion which he gives her is more than her own husband can't.

I love this series because Ryan and Carmen feel like real people and not two dimensional as most characters of this genre feel like, it takes so skill to weave a believable story and not a pile crap, I like to see more well written stories about Ryan and his mature lover Carmen....

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by Anonymous12/23/12

Having Ryan slowly coerce Carmen into having sex with other students is the way to go, maybe Ryan can blackmail her with the videos and photos hes got. Ryan could force Carmen to try and seduce one of her other students and have sex with him while Ryan's not present. At first she may be reluctant but she eventually gets into it, eventually resulting in her getting gangbanged by several of her students.

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by Darknesswoman12/24/12

wow

How more exciting can you get than having them fuck in the husbands presence. Its a good idea for her to be fucked by more students

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by Anonymous12/24/12

Add more men or students

Have Ryan make Carmen submit to a couple of his friends. Make it reluctance on her part but a final submission as she becomes his total slut.

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by Miss_Jenni12/24/12

i think you must keep the action between Ryan and Carmen because you don't want to complicate the situation with other men and making Carmen a slut to a much younger man than her husband is the goal.

At this point in the story i believe that Carmen would not needed to be blackmailed as she now can't live without Ryan in her and would perform any act for her young lover even if that meant degrading herself to please Ryan.

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by Anonymous03/01/13

going downhill

It started out good but it's turning into a bad porn. Non-stop about his thick meat shaft and taking it to the next level.

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by devilspy200108/27/13

She is leaking his goo on the kitchen floor.

Plop, plop, plop, lol Dumb cuckold. But way to bold a move

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by sasha121308/23/14

Pretty good.

It's very hot. Love this series. But now I'm a little confuse about time. Is Carmen pregnant? They have affair seems like long enough to get to her next period... Anyway, thanks!

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