by AdamZasse
You really need to do a better job of proofreading your material. Is the husbands name Jack or Joe? I did like the story but the flow of the story was interrupted by the couple of errors in it.
Really enjoyed the descriptions of hubbys submissive emotions. My first cuckolding was the same with a bigger stronger man who had me wearing my wifes panties by the end of the evening. Never knew I had a submissive side till then.
Hope to read more of your cuckolding stories.
Make your mind up what their names are. Carol becomes Barb then Carol again, Jack becomes Joe then Jack then Joe then Jack. Sloppiness is amateurish
I suggest you fix the names of the characters (easy to do - just replace the screwed up names and resubmit the story to Literotica with the work EDITED at the end of the title).
We've all done it, believe me. If you fix it and replace it the complaints will stop. Good luck.
but he was a certified jackass. Hope she divorces the idiot.