All Comments on 'Winter Passion Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
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her being a spitfire... but ill be damned if this CHAPTER isnt a spitfire itself!

a wee bit short, but good, I just hope the intermissions arent months/years long or never get completed like some great starts here on LR and elsewhere :(

TA~

AbbieStarrAbbieStarrover 11 years ago
:D

I can't wait to read the next chapter

ariesgirlariesgirlover 11 years ago

I feel for Niri but she judged Xander, her friend, it bit too harsh. She didn't even let him explain himself. Once she thinks about her actions she should apologize to Xander. He probably had a good reason for not telling her exactly who he is.

angelicbeautyangelicbeautyover 11 years ago

Awesome beginning. Can't wait to see what comes next. Was a bit short but very interesting. Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

good story so far but why is it labeled with an "H"?

EdwarusEdwarusover 11 years ago
Wow

Amazing read so far

AhzureDragonAhzureDragonover 11 years ago
Amazing

There are few good stories with dragons in them on this sight that I have found but you just stole my breath and I want more. :D I can just see the drama that could unfold between her and Xander. I can't wait. And I love that she gets to care for the baby dragons.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
too short

I wish it was longer. I love it so far, I hope it won't take long for more.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great!

Its Great so far! Can't wait to read more! Hope it won't take too long...:)

obabyobabyover 11 years ago
:)

Looking forward to more.

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