All Comments on 'The Hotel'

by lil_one89

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meh4912meh4912about 11 years ago
Good story

I liked it and would read more of your work if you post. And, I hope you do.

guysimple1674guysimple1674about 11 years ago
keep it up

It is nice, though you may provide more details about the girl's feelings and how she slowly loses herself in the lust. It would be interesting to know if she is married!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
awesome!

that was super sexy. i loved it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
more

Please share more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Gewd

I liked it. Make it a series!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Keep writing

This is a good start. What happens next? Does he take her home? Does she become his sex slave?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
love it!

I would love to see where you go with this! Please continue it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Excellent

Great story, this would make a great series, please continue

lil_one89lil_one89about 11 years agoAuthor
thank you!

Thank you guys so much for the comments!! I am working on another separate story atm but maybe I can find some time to continue this one as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A little short...

I saw it was a little short because I enjoyed it so much.

I would love to read more!

-MisterGear

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