All Comments on 'Damn, Why Didn't I Get Her Number?'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
not bad

It's a little rushed and some of the more erotic details could be still added but the premise is really good. If you re-wrote this story adding more detail it would go from a 7/10 to a 10/10.

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