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mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 11 years ago
Very nice again.

But I can't say I find this W/we, U/us stuff very easy to read - it just looks clumsy. One could rapidly become tired (see comment on your other story) of this kind of thing. Apart from that, a good story - thank you.

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