All Comments on 'Shemale Surprise Ch. 02'

He just happens to fall in love with someone who did that to them? I don't think so! You would have to be a total sissy in to humiliation to be ok with what happened. I'm not saying that is wrong by any means, but he didn't come across as a fem sissy. He seems to be 2 different characters in contrast with each other. 3*

waiting for more.....hope we get some more group action going........u also need to lengthen the descriptions during the sex scenes.....:)

re my earlier comment.......by lengthen i meant the sex was over pretty damn quick.

I've read all sorts of stoires name it and ive most likly read it and thjs is very good I like it allot yes the sex parts was short and it was only one page long each but that's a good thing cuz who wants to read a book full of sex that's wat they make romance novels for ik I've read a lot of thise two its safe to say I'm a book worm and yp auther keep wat ur doing up its very good well written with little spelling or grammer eroros wich is pretty good cuz alot of stories r full of erors and u got a story were u just wish u were in his shoes yea I admit it I'm.a cock hu.gry whore but who isn't these days wright? Srry for such a long a ling comment but overall very good writing I hope to read more of your stories

The story was very nice and I'm surprised I got so turned on from reading your words. The only thing better to read would be for you to implement some sheer pantyhose references and an office setting. Thanks for the great read.

But you need an editor or another person to proofread it before you submit it. Too many spelling, typo and grammar errors for your story to be considered to be good.

love it so far. Are you planning any further chapters in this line? I would LOVE to read more. Well done.

BTW, if this apartment building really does exist, I NEED to know where! :)

thank you for publishing it

I was think the same story but the ending he doesn't like being fucked by the girls and he tells them that, and they get mad that he doesn't like it so they stalk him and try to fuck him again or something like that. The reason I say this is because I wanna see a story were the guy doesn't end up liking the shemale for fucking or what ever she did to him.

The four main shemales gangbang Matt

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I think a wedding and a group gangbang receptions is in the works!

Literotica continues to let me down. The typos in this story in particular were horrific. Such a great story line and to be honest believable. Find yourself someone you trust to edit your stories. Flow and typos seem to be a smart phone generated submission. Try typing your stories on a PC or Mac where they do REAL spell check and not auto-correct.

Honestly, all of your stories suffer from this juxtaposition of a great, believable, well intended story with unforgivable typos, syntax, and grammar. Yet other writer's get refused for far fewer crimes, with lovely stories.

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Filled with grammar issues, MC is gangraped for hours and then decides "oh its totally fine, here come fuck me again"... Utterly stupid...

Second letdown, not fit with first. Even if not liked 5his was unbelievable.2E19

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Why can't I ever move into an apartment complex like that.

I enjoy getting trained and not by them all.

What about matt getting gangbanged by heather and her shemale friends ?

maybe a gangbang next or a blowbang from heather and the shemales

Waiting for more

Loved it, just too short 😉

I just wish to find such a woman

This story is very hot mmmmmm.

I like the way she humiliates him so so many can use him.

I love the story line. The spelling makes the story harder to follow. This situation would be a dream come true.

This was just too brutal at the end

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I think I would love shemale cock. Loved the story

loved it! my fantasy

His coworkers John and Adam ask Matt to hook them up with heather,. Heather agrees but only if they agree to take her and a friend out together. They arrive to pick them up and the friend is actually Matt dressed like a sissy looking very hot, the boys don’t realize it’s him. Eventually they return to heather apartment and they get tied up, but Matt and heather. At some point heathers friends show up “unexpectedly” and join the fun.

As Dom'ish as Heather and the Girls were and are,they are all Sweet Shemales,even if they are rough when having sex with their boytoy,but otherwise when not in a sexual situation Heather seems like a sweet shemale girl,but very playful and fun to be around.

Also Heather seems shy and timid sometimes probably because she can't fully comeout as a Shemale,but with Matt basically supporting Heather and the Girls they can live a somewhat fun lives regardless of the stigma people have against girls like Heather.But while on the subject I wish all of society would accept TG's and Shemales and TS's for who they are,they are not so different than anyone else even if they have a cock or not.