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Doomsday Trickery

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by Anonymous

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by Psycho0802/25/13

B-E-A-utiful

I can't wait to see the next instalment.

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by Anonymous02/25/13

Great

Looking forward to part II. You did a great job creating the characters, it felt like they were real people.

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by Janice193902/25/13

Trickery

The only way to deal with fantasy is make it real. Thankfully religion is only fantasy now we can love and marry since weddings were born in religious fantasy. As was slavery and doing bad things in the most loving way.
Great story I hope for you it was real.
Love Janice

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by Anonymous02/26/13

usually i am not much into the D/s thing, but somehow... and i clearly can't fathom how you did it...but - oh my - i simply can't wait to see how their story continues.
There simply is no way you can help but fall in love with the two characters.

you have a talent!

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by Anonymous03/02/13

Lovely story

Thank you for writing it, can't wait for the rest.

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Wonderful

I seem to have hit the jackpot tonite. That's several stories in a row, now, that I''ve rated a 5. This one is, by far, the best.
I sincerely hope you write part 2 of this story, but even if you never do I will be content. This was perhaps the mildest lesbian-bdsm story I've read that actually gave focus to the D/s, but it was sweet (as the chocolate syrup) and rich (as the ice cream) in the affection between slave and Mistress (and vice versa). A love story with domination and submission... makes me shiver with satisfaction.

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