All Comments on 'The Girl From The Coffee Shop'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Pure fantasy. Good read

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fun

Fun story that needs to be finished. Seems like the birthday celebration is just getting started!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good Start, Where's The Rest?

This birthday special started very well. But, it needs to be finished. Keep up the good writing. I suspect that the girl will turn out to be related to his high school sweetheart, somehow. The story needs this to finish nicely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

sexy

Shaglus_ZieglerShaglus_Ziegleralmost 2 years ago

Great quick read. What a woman. Happy birthday to you. Cheers.

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