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by BreeNoche

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
some nice lines

very personal, also a little bit cliche in images, but sad

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
Crystal grains of sand....

Sand, a symbol of time passing for sweet remembrances.... I enjoyed your poem.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
Interesting

I rather enjoyed these verses. Sweet O.

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