All Comments on 'As is, Where is, No Questions Asked'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good story

Good story--just hope it is pure fiction.

Don't wish that type of treatment on the worst whore.

Nightowl21

fakers51fakers51about 19 years ago
Strong husband

This husband had to be very strong. We now know he had the money and we know he stayed on the case for over two years to find his wife. He had the money to have some changes made to her lips. He even brougth tthe two childreninto his home to raise as his. Now if that isn't strength, what is.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Revenge or What?

Softly: I've read a lot of your stories over the years and they are all good or better. This one triggered my revenge button. I Think I might have left her there but it's not my story so the ending was yours to call.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
The Bitch Got What She Deserved

... I don't know that I actually believe this story, because I can tell you from having spent a few years "in country" in what used to be, and still is referred to as Rhodesia by us "blancs" that the native tribes know full well that to kidnap and rape a white woman means death. If not right then and there, then soon, and usually by an unidentified helicopter gunship.

For real, these "private air forces" are for hire if you have the right money and the "correct politics". Apartheid is still alive and well in some remote areas where these few remnants of old white air forces still exist.

Africa is a huge and completely misunderstood place; the largest and most impenetrable of the continents, it has every possible climate. And most tribes, such as the Xhosa don't want white women to fuck. They are considered arrogant, ugly and do not know how to cook or keep a hut clean. They don't know how to tend the crops or the animals. And if a woman like the one in this story was gone for this length of time, she would(no shit) have been dead.

Unfortunatrly, AIDS is truly rampant in Africa, and outsiders are the reason the tribes are being infected.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Weel Done

Very good story. Would like to know how they got along and how the children are as they grow up. Was the wife ever tempted again ?

Katie in NEW JERSEY

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oh jesus

Not more from the impotent DWannabe...

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
LOVE AND CONQUERING

and finding and rescuing from her follies. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
DWhuecuck is so stupid

he thinks Johnny Cash is a pay toilet

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 12 years ago
Confusing

I really don't know how to react to this tale. Revenge? I guess, maybe, I don't know. Retribution? Again, I don't know. Should he have left her there?

They say love conquers all. I thought I knew once. I don't know.

I'm done.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
19 months???

I would NOT have left Everett there without going myself (with a Barrett 50 cal.) to try to get him out, let alone my cheating slut wife. Not sure if this is supposed to be humorous, or a fitting-revenge story. Neither works for me, but ...

I hope Everett is out of the picture...probably took himself out when he saw Sweetie's new 'enhancements!'

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hmmmm?

Not sure I'd be up for dining on broiled grubs or deep fried red ants.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Original and entertaining

Plus I'm scared of Canfield (ha, ha)!

phil2213phil2213over 10 years ago
Funny as hell....what a recipe for revenge!

This short was presented with a heavy handed concern for detail. The story ran right to the meat, forget the potatoes. It was bizarre and funny with poetic license I'm full force. This author took full control of his story. I found it to be quite entertaining. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
GREAT STORY!

I'm only wondering, how about the neck rings? I read someplace that those rings dislocate the neck joints such that the removing of the rings can cause real problems(?)...

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
WHATS A SCHOLAR TO DO

ring around the rosey just wont do it, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
The real message here is how a guy should love his wife...

All over the world people marry with sweet words of unending passion. But then when their better half gives in to temptation, even just once, it's time for tears, self-pity, revenge and greed, all even in the name of religion. Of course, the next mate may well be a retired hooker but the important thing is that one he/she swore to love forever feels unending shame. What I like about these stories, here, is the concept that when married, one loves his/her mate no matter what. This should be a love message far beyond something one would acquire in a pious theology lecture...

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsover 9 years ago
why bother ?

He has millions of dollars, and women are fairly cheap in most of the world.

Why would he go to that much trouble to get back a cheating one?

Why spend that much to buy one with that much mileage on her?

Why take the two children not of his own DNA to raise?

He is wealthy enough to do better for himself.

SamWarrensSamWarrensabout 7 years ago
Beware what you ask for

A cautionary tale to be sure. Would have been better if her time as a captive and all that sex had been described from her pov.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Awful

So bad

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
WTF?

You're a better author than this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Surgeon's delight

Twenty times per day with men who are seven feet tall. Two kids too.

Her lip is not the only thing that would have required reconstructive surgery.

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Why would anyone want this whore back after being with those giant dildos. Worse even than this author’s usual.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was not worth the effort

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More ridiculous stereotypes and LW anatomical illiteracy. Height and cock size don't correlate in a statistically significant way. Neither do race (white/black) and cock size. This is one of the worst plots I've seen. Xhosa aren't that tall, nor are they cannibals.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Anonymousover 4 years ago

WTF?

You're a better author than this.Anonymousover 4 years ago

WTF?

You're a better author than this.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

who would want that back?

truthandjustice99truthandjustice995 months ago

I had hoped there would be a mistake in the handover and a napalm droppping helicopter flys over and burn the village to the ground with all inhabitant except for the leader who is held down while all his limbs are cut off then finally his head. He is thrown into the fire also

Buster2UBuster2U5 months ago

What a Fun and Epic Story for 5 big blazing stars! The wife thinks she can have a lover and hubby won't care or even notice. LOL, Hubby's always notice. They always care. She got kidnapped and Darn lived a constant gang bang having two little split-race kids. Her mother would be proud of her multiculturism. Only because Hubby was Rich was she able to be rescued even tho she didn't deserve it. I have had so many slut girlfriends and wives they are always fun until they can't explain where their latest VD came from. I threw the prettiest bustiest woman I ever had out the front door followed by everything she owned when she gave me "crabs" the second time. Gosh that hurt, I cared for her. But my "fragile male ego" couldn't handle her passing my pussy around to some other guys while I was at work. Anyway, I really like this story. I think the wife learned her lesson, at least for a while. Regardless, I certainly enjoyed reading this. Thanks for the Effort. Buster2U

Hardday1953Hardday1953about 1 month ago

Let's get business out of the way. I give you and your guide Five Stars, count them 1, 2, 3, 4, 5. I enjoy the plot of the story. After forty-one years of marriage and being treated as a king, I braved the lions, too, to get her back!!!!!!

Here, here, well done, come and share stories.

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