All Comments on 'Kunti’s Dalliance with the Sun God'

by obhilaash

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Sanjayanand1Sanjayanand1almost 11 years ago
Great Story

Great Story. Just a suggestion: Background first would have helped non Indian readers. Otherwise great choice of words and erotic writing. Please write more. Mahabharat would provide many such opportunities. Birth of Dhritrashtra, Vidhur and Pandu. Death of Pandu. Draupadi and many more.

obhilaashobhilaashalmost 11 years agoAuthor
waiting for more welcoming comments like yours

—I plan to take up more myths, thank you

only waiting for more welcoming comments like yours :)

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 11 years ago
A nice take on the Sun God & Kunti's

Boon --- Karna 'tis rumoured was born in an Instant & cruelly chucked into the river a la Moses by his biological mother -- thou hast tarried on the dalliance between God & Royal Wench but not given thy readers the Birth of the Grestest Hero of the Kurukshetra Battle , nay , of Mahabharata itself !?! Excellent writin' : 5-ed !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved the story! !!

Only word for story 'its brilliant'

Plzz keep on writing more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
request

write about Arjun and Ulupi and Chitrangada and Subhadra; about Draupadi.

Sanjayanand1Sanjayanand1almost 11 years ago
Waiting eagerly

Your writing has power. It is as if you are professional writer. Indian Mythology and Mahabharat in particular has powerful plots for writer of your caliber. Write soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
draupadi

you should write about draupadi with her five husbands

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

This is different!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

make about draupadi first, pick up ramayan too make about sita and ravan gangbang, and make one about durga and mahisasura

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Make with every god

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