All Comments on 'Sunrise'

Different but entertaining.

Thanks for the comment. Most of my stuff I write with my audience in mind. I think I wrote this one for me. Which explains why it's different, I suppose. At any rate, I certainly do appreciate you letting me know you enjoyed it. -P

I love this. Short and sweet but with a twist and a kick at the end. Not your usual genre (though there is always a fraught love connection somewhere!), but it's definitely 'pure Panthem': raw, gutsy and a joy to read. More where this came from, please!!

Thanks for writing! I thought you'd disappeared form the scene and I was so glad to see a new story on your profile (which I check religiously!...)

I wrote a longer comment but it went into ??? I loved this story. Such despair and sadness. Thank you for the write. Jim

I'm glad you're back and writing! I love your stories. Though I do hope the palpable pain in this story isn't yours. Extremely well written (as usual). <3

I just seem to connect with your writing, and this story is another example of that. Part of what I really like about this is the unanswered questions this leaves. Yet, you want to know more. Thanks for writing.

And incredibly sad

Damn

I hate fucking cheaters.

Sorry, way too dark to be a good read for me. That said, the little details, like the feel of grit under her feet gave it richness

No One Noticed

The Ides of March? This was the only way her story could end. Signed: BTW