All Comments on 'We Are One'

... with a good story to tell. Thank you for posting this for us, InfamousIndeed, and please bring us more - you write well.

Welcome to Literotica - it is nice to be able to be the first to say that - and four stars for a really good submission.

Intensity and love. Thank you.

pure poetry. Thank you. The big 5 from me. Take care...and hope we hear more from you. Take care...

Wow - that ending was unexpected. Nicely done. Welcome to Lit!

What a wonderful ending and truly unexpected. You are a gifted writer and I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Breathless. Words couldnt justify how with just one page the ride of a life time was made. Thank you.