All Comments on 'Paid for a Show!'

Very erotic, made me wish I could join in...certainly made me hot and very hard!

Keep writing. A few too many errors and missing words in the text but its hard to be perfect. Suggest an editor might help you on the next story. But, it is a good story and you can contribute a lot to this site. Thanks

Thanks for all the comments. Hopefully my next one will be better with less errors.

Jeane

Thank you for a very good story.

Knowing that it is a true story makes it so much more enjoyable.

I read both stories and thought it was Great.

Thank you and I hope you tell us about more of your sexy fun. :)

Thank you for sharing this true story. The way you tell it brings it to life. I hope that we have many more examples here of your talented writing. You are a joy to read.