by Catmandu
very nice, a little punctuation and one missed antecedent, but overall a wonderful story.. what next?
Wow reminded me so much of a similar fucking session I had with my boyfriend and my best friend!!
Thank you. I liked it a lot, so please write more... Yes, there were some errors, but easily overlooked for your 1st story. A mentor or proof reader would help eliminate most of these errors. As far as comments made by Anonymous "to bad they can't spell their name" - otherwise they would have been proud to let you know who made that remark. I‘d like to read their stories, but they probably have none.