by Ironsilk
I love your story...can't wait for the next chapter. ..please make it longer :)
I hope this is the beginning of a multi-chapter story.
Interesting start and nicely done for a first story. Look forward to more.
A good start,interesting plot,look forward for more and longer chapters soon,,,thanks..
Its a new twist i haven"t seen on this site and i cant wait for more.
Keep going! Looking forward to the next installment. Please dont keep us waiting