All Comments on 'The Chosen One Ch. 08'

5 stars. Awesome

The Wedding was so beautiful! So many emotions. (both for me and the couple) What a grand surprise for Laura. I love when a ghost saves the day! ;-) That shocker at the end! I thought for sure the blond was the "bad guy." Who would of ever expected the sweet little waitress! And what did she do to them? She can't kill them off now! How are they going to get around that can of worms? You had better post the next chapter fast, you evil man! hehe

What the fuck cant believe its alina and i liked her so much too

Well old Salt, you've done it again! Now I think you are writing in 3D. What wonderful verbal descriptions. The only fault I find is that you are making me nervous. What devious twists have you planned next? Hmm!

Your talent still astounds me...though it shouldn't

great job my friend.

Sweet little Alina? you used the damn waitress? Please don't kill her, she's so sweet. I cried during the wedding (just me) then you kick me in the tits with Nadia. Bad boy and you need slapped.

Well Sir Boneams, you have out done yourself yet again. The wedding was beautiful and w/the dress and the rings from the past being part of wedding you certainly hit the romance button a few times. I love the ghosts, who they are and what they did to make the wedding to special. And to top off the great wedding you reveal the evil doer as a cliff hanger......hurry w/chapter 9 will yes........

to pay for the box of tissues that I used up reading this chapter - I will expect $1.79 plus tax in the mail soon. LOL - and yes, never apologize for making the reader cry. I will stand by that comment forever. It shows how great an author you are if you can bring that amount of emotion from a reader, be it happy tears or sad ones. And you, my dear friend, are an outstanding author with so much talent. I have laughed out loud and cried reading your stories. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. hugs to you. Kate

Any author that has me all emotional and crying like a blubbering fool is A+ in my book. Bravo! You out did yourself, I would stand up and clap but I would look like a lunatic. I'm currently waiting in the car line picking up my kid from school.

Always with the cliffhangers! Damn it man! Can't wait to see where you lead us next =)

YES U GOT US. (ROKML)* BUT WE'RE NOT MAD AT U. WE LOVE IT. BUT MY MONEY WAS ON THE GRUMPY HUSBAND AND MUCH TO HAPPY WIFE. TRULY ENJOYED THIS INSTALLMENT OF OUR FAVORITE COUPLES. I CAN HARDLY WAIT FOR THE NEXT INSTALLMENT BUT I KNOW I MUST.

*ROLLING OVER KILLING MYSELF LAUGHING

And I was really beginning to like the bar maid. I hope the real one is ok and the bitch just hid her somewhere. I also wonder how she found them so quickly. So is the torte poisoned? Why didnt Kevin sense danger? What's with the grumpy blond? So many questions. Hope the next chapter comes soon.

Tissues required!!! The wedding played out perfectly, the ending left me panic stricken! Oh dear man, why do you love to tease us so?? <3

You got me with that one, nice read keep it up

That I did not except. Damn and I thought she was in New York or it was the blond. Good work you had us fooled.

These guys are supposed to be pros! They just let everyone see their faces, let mofos take pictures of them and trust any and every damn body! Sheesh!

Laura didn't genuflect to Adam, that would be too weird to see. Men genuflect when they bent one knee to the ground to ask a woman to marry them; or in respect or worship. Women instead, they curtsey/curtsy, that's when they bow gracefully. My guess, the word you were looking for was "curtseyed".