All Comments on 'Fantasy Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
freakin loved it!

Freakin loved it! More...soon please :)

SherriTSherriTover 10 years ago
MORE, MORE, MORE

Give us more, more, more please. This was really good.

HPPocketsHPPocketsover 10 years agoAuthor
Theres more

don't forget to check out my blogs for stories not yet edited enough to post here. there is a lot more to come.

short and smutty

http://latenightscribbler.blogspot.com/

Story log

http://eroticscribe.blogspot.com/2013/11/sabrinas-new-world-ch-one.html

peachesgirlpeachesgirlover 10 years ago
Very good.

I enjoyed Ruby's adventure. I like that she was her own person, and was not afraid of the supernatural beings coming on to her. Very hot, cant wait for more.

VladofVladofover 10 years ago
Fleshed out

Great story. I think you could turn this into a serious fic, with a little fleshing out of characters and environment. Really good stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Lol. i am a huge fan of Kresley Cole. This was a good story, but it doesn't hold a candle next to Kresley's works

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

very well done. keep writing.

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