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Anonymousover 10 years ago

beautiful story

wow. i loved this. can't wait to hear about new years eve.

crushedice over 10 years ago

Great erotic build up.

It is the build up, the glances that create the eroticism that I like.

Keep this up for the next chapter.

Anonymousover 10 years ago

WOW

I really like where you are going with this. Welcome back and I have noticed that this is your first submission in the fetish catagory. Hope it's not your last!

fflover58 over 10 years ago

Great story!

Really love the build-up and realism of this story. I can picture Brittany pretty well, as you describe her so clearly. More please!

Anonymousabout 10 years ago

Feet Fuck Sexy Fuck

Smooch. One of the best. But why oh why did they not lick the juices of the toes Going to read the second one now.

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Hello. I am back! I suddenly got that itch again. Right now I started writing a new challenging story. I have it published on Chyoa.com. I will be posting it here as well. I have been here for 20 years and I love to still hear your feedback. I hope everyone says hello sometime!

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