All Comments on 'Her Man's Shirt'

by Oldbear63

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 10 years ago

Cute love poem, Oldbear

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 10 years ago
Wow!! Sexeeeee!

High-5 !!!

TsothaTsothaabout 10 years ago

Ah, yes. There is something about women in men's shirts, isn't there? Very nice scene. :)

todski28todski28almost 10 years ago
i cant believd i missed this

Thanks trix for the highlight,

The sentiment in this is beautiful but I think you could make it far better with some cleaning up and cutting back,

Could cut

The shirt Maybe not even buttoned and not hurt the central theme.

pelegrinopelegrinoover 9 years ago

I read this after having read Trixareforkids' poem and I am thrilled by how a good love poem can give birth to another good love poem. Umberto Eco said, "Many books just talk about other books". Was he not right?

Thank you both

5ed both!

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Exotic

Yes, yes and yes: women in shirts (and nothing else) are exotic. Loved it all, Oldbear, except for "shirt tales" which jarred. Tails, I believe.

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredover 9 years ago
Loved it!

Just beautiful Oldbear

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