by Oldbear63
Ah, yes. There is something about women in men's shirts, isn't there? Very nice scene. :)
Thanks trix for the highlight,
The sentiment in this is beautiful but I think you could make it far better with some cleaning up and cutting back,
Could cut
The shirt Maybe not even buttoned and not hurt the central theme.
I read this after having read Trixareforkids' poem and I am thrilled by how a good love poem can give birth to another good love poem. Umberto Eco said, "Many books just talk about other books". Was he not right?
Thank you both
5ed both!
Yes, yes and yes: women in shirts (and nothing else) are exotic. Loved it all, Oldbear, except for "shirt tales" which jarred. Tails, I believe.